How not to report about rape

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A 33 year old man was arrested for rape when his 11 year old victim became pregnant. This seriously abysmal article about it not only describes what happened as the alleged rapist having sex or intercourse with the victim. It also describes events in a way that communicates absolutely nothing and most likely glosses over forcible rape.

The 11-year-old girl told investigators Dyson several times attempted to have sex with her while the two were residing at a residence along East Larwill Street, said Merillat, adding the girl said Dyson was successful in having intercourse with her twice.

Of course it doesn't matter if the girl said yes, it is still rape, and a 33 year old man has absolutely no excuse for raping an 11 year old. I can think of a few scenarios in which actions can be described as above that aren't violent or forceful that involve the girl changing her mind, being physically unable, and the man actually listening. But somehow that doesn't seem the most likely.

If he did indeed try to force the girl violently against her will, it is unconscionable to write about it in this way. It trivializes rape and makes it sound as if the girl was willing, as if at 11 she could be capable of meaningful consent.